Originally Posted by Anonymous

Misplaced modifier/passive voice corrected:

Working with Ex-Scientologists, the organization raised over $5000 for Saxton's legal defense in less than 24 hours.

Originally Posted by chrisanon

I've taken what you said to heart here, but press releases are not works of reportage.

They are opinion pieces, meant to convey info and a point of view to the news media. They're works of persuasion.

It's up to journalists to exhibit journalistic objectivity. It's up to the writers of a press release to firmly assert their side of the story to journalists.

But yeah, some of the language is a little overheated. I'll remove it.

Originally Posted by chrisanon

It's just you.

Originally Posted by Herro

No, it's not just him. It sounds ridiculous. It's a tongue in cheek joke that you dunces have taken seriously. And you look foolish when you try to use it seriously.

Originally Posted by Herro

Is it wrong that I wonder what it would be like to fuck your ghostly eye socket?

Originally Posted by Fuckeye

^

Ditch that bollocks, the media won't give a shit.